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[Double Helix]

Your leavin' isn't news -- I've heard it all before
And like a cancelled check be bouncing back to me once more
You've dealt me quite a blow -- But I can't let you go
Something's missing, the lips I'm kissing are cold

[cho]
Better think it over -- I need a little time alone
I'm an available shoulder
And one last time I want at least my eyes on you

We were going to try and change -- But it's the same old thing again
Our nuptial is functional, but we ain't even friends
And now you're feeling down, we'll put on some Jackson Browne
Maybe Fountain of Sorrow, we'll both feel better tomorrow

[cho]
Better think it over -- We need a little time alone
The honeymoon is over
And one last time I want at least my eyes on you

You were used to running wild -- But now we're running our last mile
Our destiny's a mess to me that we can't reconcile
You were once my magic friend, now we have reached a tragic end. . .

(yet another in the continuing saga of "I Gave You My High School Ring on the Back of the Bus")

 

[Fox]

Awesome! Would love to "hear" and "see" how this song develops (if you're up for sharing that).

Might be good to say what you're wanting in sharing this. I could offer some ideas, but frankly, I'm always hesitant to do that, because each song (and every individual) has their own path, and not being you, I don't know what that is!

That said, very cool start!

 

[Double Helix]

Don't be hesitant; I'm forever curious
(I do, indeed, wonder what it might have become with some collaboration)

Thanks for the thinkin' about it